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love poem for school?


i wrote this poem i wrote for school…it sounds bad and needs major adjustments. can you help me reorganize each line?
love is a myth
love is a chemical reaction in your brain
love is a friendship
love is everything
love is an undefined term
love is to care
love is an emotion
love is a physiological response to our biological clock
love is magic

That’s pretty good, you may want to end it with something like, &quot:This is how I see it&quot: maybe after every line, for example,
Love is a myth,
this is what I see
Love is a chemical reaction in your brain,
this is what they say
Love is a friendship,
this is how I feel

hope that helps you

1’st of all … separate the FACT from the FICTION …
what i mean is … Tell me the diffrence between &quot: mith &quot: and &quot: chemical reaction &quot: … or … &quot: physiological &quot: and &quot: magic &quot: ?

&quot:Love is an undefined term/Love is everything&quot: .. should defenetly be the LAST lines … cuz’ it reaveals that aldough love is associated above with friendship … care … emotion …etc … NOBODY can define it …

I would write it down is this order :
&quot: love is a chemical reaction in your brain
love is a physiological response to our biological clock
love is a friendship
love is an emotion
love is to care
love is a myth
love is magic
Love is an undefined term
Love is everything &quot:

WHY ??? it’s a loooong story … even more complicated than above 🙂

Love is a myth, so they say
Love is a chemical reaction in your brain
Love is a friendship, strong and true
Love is everything to me and you
Love is an undefined term
Love is to care, and love is an emotion
Love is a physiological response to our biological clock
Love is magic
But most of all
Love is the one thing that doesn’t stop

There’s something about you
That makes me feel
As if nothing can go wrong
That nothing is real
My stomache has butterflies
Just fluttering away
My heart is beating
In an unusual way
My mind races
Can’t think of anything to say
My knees feel weak
And I begin to sway
But when I’m with you
I know everythings okay
Because my only concern
Is that for longer you should stay
So just know this
In my life you are a big deal
And nothing i say or do
Can express truly how i feel

Try this one!!!

it’s too repetative…..love is love is love is…….
maybe:
Love is a myth
A chemical reaction
Love is a friendship
An emotion indescribable
Love is magic
Which knows no time
Where is this love?
Love is everywhere
Love is everything

i wish i had talent like you
my boyfriend asked me to write him a poem
and im stomped

so i just wrote him a love letter 🙂

love is losing
love is gaining.
love is a myth
love is a fact
love is to feel
love is to care
love is hope
love is magic
love is everything.

😀

You forgot love is a choice, and I choose to love my sweetie Fuego addict!

its all good but the second 2 last line and thats it i give it a b+

i think its cool

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